I’ve spent lots of time this week trying to finish my new short story on the Deep Cove monster. It will be the fourth installment behind Deep Cove, Deep Cove: The Party Crasher, and The Deep Cove Lineage. These sci-fi stories are written like a serial–a continuing story line. It is almost finished and ready for others to proof.
1. Deciding how much to leave out. Fiction, because it exists entirely in the mind of the creator, can go as far as you want it to. When I write about the woman being attacked by the monster, for instance, my mind sees the whole thing at once. The problem is, the whole thing at once might bore the reader to tears. I mean, seriously, does the reader really care what kind of shoes the old woman has on? But at the same time I recognize these kinds of detail can give the story a rich, narrative depth. It is always a struggle to know where to stop.
2. Continuity in the story. This is hard enough in a single novel, but it becomes increasingly difficult for me when the stories pile up, such as the Deep Cove series. Many of the characters in The Little Girl Waits are from my first book or other short stories, and I had to really be careful that I didn’t change anything significant about their characters. I almost did. At one point I almost changed the gender and name of one of Butch Gregory’s kids. Yikes.
3. Continuity in the character. I would like input from other writers on this one, because I find that maintaining a character’s voice is not the easiest thing in the world to do. I’ve got a character, Colonel Crews, who in the Deep Cove Lineage has a certain demeanor and I am finding it hard to keep him ‘in character’ in the new story. I don’t know why that is, because I wrote him the first time. Why is it so hard to keep him in personality stasis?
4. Fight scenes. I love reading a good fight scene, and I think I understand the logistics of writing them and how they should work. The problem I have is lack of experience in actual fighting. The last fight I remember being in was in fourth grade. A kid flicked my ear from the seat behind me on the bus and I lunged over the top of the seat, put him in a headlock, and pounded his nose with my left hand. He never picked on me again. However, not all fights can go like that. I have to really work at writing these–even to the point of acting it out in the study to feel how the motion goes. Oh I hope no one ever sees me fighting with myself through the window. They will think I’m Edward Norton from Fight Club.
5. Keeping the tension high. Tension is the key to interest. No one is interested if everyone is happy and the world is picture perfect. Things have to go wrong and the threat of danger must be near. I can do that fairly easily, but what I have a hard time is keeping it high. As a human being, I want things to balance out cleanly before the next tension arises, but this linear mojo is not in keeping with life or good art. It is far better when the tension swirls all over the place and never truly comes to resolution. I find doing that to be a real challenge indeed.
There are many other challenges in writing fiction, but these are some that I’ve been mindful of on my most recent projects. If you are a writer/artists, feel free to share what your major challenges are right now, or if you’re willing, share how you overcome some of these that I’ve mentioned.
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